Flash Fiction

Location, Location, Location

Location, Location, Location

Trevor strode across the dusty car park into the site office.

“Hi, can I help you? I’m Aaron.” The man rose from a shiny wooden desk and thrust out his hand. Smart suit, flashy watch.

“I can’t believe this. I’ve lived here yonks. Never thought they’d build on this shitty scrap of land.”

Aaron blinked. “Infilling is an efficient way of developing greenbelt land. Were you interested in a plot?”

“Oh yes.”

“Oh,” Aaron blinked a few more times. “Right… Let me show you around then.”

Outside, Trevor marched off down the tacky road, acrid tar invading his nostrils, ignoring Aaron’s gasped attempts to describe the layouts of the townhouses. They progressed past glossy show homes and half-built shells, until plots that were no more than scruffy outlines gave way to the scrubby grassland of before. 

“Over there,” Trevor pointed. “Right o’ that tree I reckon. S’there a plot there?”

“Err…” Aaron consulted his site plan. “That’ll be number seventeen, a super two bed…”

“Perfect,” Trevor interrupted, staring at the hedge line.

“Is there a particular reason…”

“West, innit?” he waved his hand out. “I remember the sun settin’…”

*********

Nine months later, Trevor sat in his garden at number seventeen, beer in hand, as the sun set before him. Digging down to lay the hardcore for the patio had been a nightmare. Hard ground this time of year. Panic had been creeping in until he struck the blue plastic tarpaulin. He’d stopped digging and tipped rubble into the hole. 

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Tambourine Man

Tambourine Man

“Excuse me, Kate, do you know how my dad is today?”

The day sister looked up from her paperwork and smiled warmly. 

“Hi, Laura. Er… I’m afraid he’s not so good. He didn’t get much sleep last night apparently and he’s a bit more confused than last week.”

Laura plastered on a smile for the benefit of Sebastian who, not yet tall enough to see over the desk, stood gripping her hand and glancing wide-eyed in every direction at once.

“We’ll just have to see if we can’t cheer him up a bit then, hey Seb?”

Her son gave a small nod, then jumped as a large metal cage full of bedding rattled past.

Laura crouched down to Seb’s level and gave his fingers a squeeze. “Don’t worry if Granddad seems different, he’s just a bit poorly at the moment, okay?” 

Seb nodded more firmly this time. 

“Okay, mum.”

When they reached Eric’s room, Laura leaned around the doorframe to get a look at her dad. Eric was sitting staring out of the window with a blanket over his knees.

“Hi Dad,” Laura called as she led Seb inside. There was no reply, no movement even, from the frail figure in the chair.

“Hi Granddad!” Seb offered bravely.

Eric turned then and gave a strange, bright smile. Laura swallowed. That was not her dad’s smile, full of twinkling mischief. It was the one he gave when he had awareness enough to know he was supposed to, but no idea why.

Laura tried to talk to him, but Eric’s answers were non sequiturs, saying he liked the food, and the view from his window. Except he could not quite remember ‘window’, and just waved a skeletal arm at the glass-filled frame to his right.

“Window, Granddad,” Seb said matter-of-factly, not a trace of surprise at his granddad struggling for such a simple word.

Then he held up his satchel and shook it, making Eric’s eyes brighten at the jangling sound it produced. “I thought you might like a go on this, Granddad. I got it from school.” 

Seb pulled a tambourine from his bag, its wood worn smooth by years of childrens’ hands. He tapped a rhythm against his palm then shook the tambourine’s shimmering zills with a flourish, his arms outstretched like a cabaret performer.

Eric actually laughed then, and took the offered instrument. He began patting out a beat, hesitantly at first, and then with more confidence as he started to sing. 

The lyrics, though a fantastical poetry, flowed from somewhere deeper than Eric’s illness could reach, and when he got to the final verse, he winked at Laura.

“Take me disappearing through the smoke rings of my mind, down the foggy ruins of time…”

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An Easy Conscience

An Easy Conscience

This short piece was a writing exercise at a Royston Writers Circle meeting. The exercise was to open a book at random and use the first full sentence as a prompt.

I wrote in response to this quote:

‘God, if he believed in him, and his conscience, if he had one, were the only judges to whom he might look.’

Jules Verne, ‘20000 Leagues Under the Sea’

Since he was furnished with neither a belief in a deity, of any kind you understand, he was not prejudiced against any religion in particular; nor had committed any act his conscience deemed worthy of note, Stuart had simply floated through his formative years unencumbered by such fetters. It was at the tender age of fourteen and a half that he was first troubled by either one of these concepts. In truth, it turned out to be a combination of both. 

The priests at Stuart’s school had all attempted to instil in the children an unholy fear of the consequences of misbehaviour which, unfortunately for Stuart, appeared to include his burgeoning feelings of being rather more interested in boys than in girls. As he grew up, indeed, it was to his best friend, Jack, that his attentions turned.

Jack was a good, god-fearing boy, so Stuart’s mother told him, and an example Stuart would apparently do well to follow more closely. Stuart was happy to heed his mother’s advice, though perhaps she had not intended him to interpret her words in quite the way he did. It was safe to say that she was surprised when she walked in on the two of them sharing a kiss after school one afternoon. She demanded that Stuart examine his conscience as a result of his actions. However, having done so, he could only conclude that, like god, his conscience did not appear to exist. 

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